Uber sweeeeeet!

=]

The third stanza lacked flow.
While the rest had a certain flow to it.
But still adorable.

Glad your happy, babe.
You deserve it.

Lovce you so much =]

I love the emotion of this poem, it's semi-
short and sweet. I ecspecially like this stanza
"You've become my everything,
I don't want to lose this feeling.
When I get scared of losing you,
you always say, "I love you."
It really gives a good closing to the poem. If you understand what I mean. SOme poems leave you kind of hanging in a way.But I don't feel that way here!
Great Job
*Amber*