"The music plays softly,
Yet so vivid and clear.
A song you would love,
But never will hear."
That was my favorite stanza, but the entire thing was AMAZING! You are an amazing poet altogether, and therefore, I think you are underrated on this site, but hey, a lot of people are. I'm just shocked and apalled that all you have is bronze awards. Just keep in mind that no matter what the few people who ACTUALLY read poems on this site say and decide as far as "your talent", you hold something amazing. Don't keep it to yourself.
PV