Just Wanted Him To Call...

by Monica AKA Mika   Jun 1, 2007


She stares at her phone waiting for it to ring,
All she wants is for his name to show up on the display screen.

She loses all hope and looks away from the phone,
Then she thinks about how much she just hates being alone,

She looks out the window and starts thinking about the day before,
That huge argument and him slamming that door.

She remembers him saying that she wished she would die,
And she said she wouldn't care she didn't even ask why.

She comes to an intersection & she proceeds,she jus wanted to apologize she wanted him let him know,
That he was the love her life and she didn't want him to go,

For her light was green and the other was red,
And as she looks back at the phone something hit the side of her head,

It knocks her completely out of the car and her phone lands by her feet,
And as she takes her last breath,...his name shows up on her display screen....

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  • 17 years ago

    by Javier

    This was also a sad but good poem i love the way you tell stories with your words your just great!

  • 17 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    Wow......the title does not do the poem justice...amazing work..amazing, wow...i love the storyline behind it, the whole concept of "too late"..wow, great work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    This is what that in a very few minutes it made me sad. and somewhere in my heart i feel lonely. its awesome. it was nice. you have tlaent keep it up nice work i will must give you 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very good
    i loved the emotion
    a lot of people can relate to it
    I think it was excellent
    5/5
    kaila

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Wow!!...Excellent....very good story-ish write
    It flowed well...though the structure was a tad problem...the emotions filled in this work is amazing!
    Well penned!
    5/5
    xxPoojaxx