Hey...i liked this one..but..The "once again"s really was kind of repeated..maybe u could change it to something else...I liked the emotions this one had..and all over good job!..but certainly not your best!.. |
by Mousie
I really liked it... something we all can relate to, it was nice. it was short but had a good flow and good wording and was just a simplistic poem. great job |
by UnToLd TrUtH
I really liked it. I loved your explanations of your emotions and how you worded the poem itself. 5/5 |