This poem is very different from the rest ..
i liked it, it was pretty interesting .

i juss don't like the first stanza .. you mentioned "misery" but it actually seems like you're havin` some funn` gettin` it on .

interesting poem tho xD

Wow!Great job...simple..different..lol..i liked it...yeah i liked the poem but the first stanza could've been better
Anyways..God job on this one!
kp it up!
5/5
xxPoojaxx

LMA0!!!!!!
DAYUM.....
JUS' DAYUM....L0L
5/5
i L0V3 iT!!! L0L

Great work you could have fooled me.

I love this poem so much it seems like you put alot of thought in to! i know how you feel ive been in the same situation to keepp it up very good

Ha

its awesome!!

Ohhh nice one =) i love it =) made me laugh and i love to laugh so thank u for that love =)

5/5
xoxo,
Tess

Your thoughts are all over the place in this one. At first I thought she cheated on you. Choose your words carefully. It's a good poem, though. =]

Ohh. so your wantin to get with your best friends girl are you? haha jk

nice poem. good rhyme.

-Tar-[[Baby]]

I love this poem. It was so funny. I was expecting you to be miserable but oh well. I think the misersble part would be cool if you had mentioned a guilt conscious or something but it was still good.

Hey im not mad i think its really good keep it up
~danielle~

I LIKE THIS POEM.....CUZ THIS REALLY HAPPENS 2 PEOPL3

Who would be mad? Stuff jus happen, I am thinkin u put it out reserve and it could be a trick to read this. But it really interesting and I like it.. U r just very tight.. Hahaha.. Unless u r not bored anymore. Haha by the way, thanks for the comments!

Wow that actually happened bwtween my ex's bestfriend and me, well i should just say friend, cuz they arent the bestfriend's they use to be....but they say it wasnt me...but this is a great poem and it took me back to so many really good memories that I probably didnt want to remember..but keep on writing

Wow! lol...it's funny cause that happens a lot...well keep up the good work! 5/5
xoxo
~waiting~

I like this poem, cause is really surprising..
Didn't thought you were the one who cheated, thought she was cheating in the beginning.. As more readers noticed..
That makes it funny,
Good poem,
I really enjoyed reading it.
Take care

This was okay. It was a bit muddled at parts, but it was worth a read.

Brad

Haha, niiice. mad at you? how can someone be mad at you because of a poem? lol, i'm not sure about the topic but i liked the way you worded it. good job, yo. peace out. :]