I love this.
really do.
i haven't read anything like it before, and it's going on my favourite poems. =]

i think the way it flows without a rhytem was great.
&& i love the idea.

the tone was soft and emotional.

good work, hunni. <3

I liked this one=)

The idea was superb...short and well penned
The poem flowed well and i really adore this one...

Conveys a very beautiful message too and kind of held emotions plain yet well done...
Frankly have'nt read anything of this sort before...
5/5

Im liking your poem....nice=)