It was good, but the rhyme scheme didn't flow very well. And the subject seemed to change, at first I though it was about a man storming out on his wife or something, but then it kind of changed into a poem about how amazing summer is.

However, I liked it alot. 4/5 keep up the good work

Summer definately doesn't last long enough and we should enjoy the weather while it's here, soon enough it will be winter again. Excellent job and great flow once again, you have excellent potential as a writter. 5/5

I love this one, has hidden meaning

Wow!..You write nature poems well...again in this one...Good imagery and it flowed well too and i liked the way you penned out the beauty of the season
Kp writing!
5/5

xxPoojaxx

Your definitly have talent when it comes to writing nature poems, they are such vivid beautiful poems with great description and amazing imagery. Penned beautifully flowed nicely. a great peice of work here. Enjoyed reading it~mel