Its Burdon

by AMoreMIo   Jun 2, 2007


I feel Its gentle breeze go through my hair
I feel Its gentle touch go through my skin
I feel Its great love go through my vains

Can you tell me what It is?
Can you see It also?
Am I the only one that can bear it?

You feel Its great pressure
You feel Its great pain
You feel Its lost love go through your vains

Can I tell you Who I am?
Can I tell you How I feel?
Are you the only one left to bear It?

I feel you want to Leave Me
You feel I want to stay....

Can I tell You I'm ok?
Can you tell me Its ok?

We are teh only ones that can bear Its pain.

by:alicia
~please rate and comment thanks!!:)~

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I hope people understand it...if you doo please tell me on the comments..so i know theres others that feel the same thing thanks

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  • 17 years ago

    by mohamed

    Very nice poem..grt work keep it up??
    -mohd-

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I actually understood it, I I can relate to it. Well written. 5/5
    Keep writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by kasia nicole

    Really good poem, i really did like it and thanks for the info ill use it when im writing keep it up to =p

  • 17 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Hmm this poem is difficult to understand. I'm not sure if i got it or not but i will try. You feel as if you a drifting someone away? It's a great though. 4/5
    -vino

  • 17 years ago

    by Alicia

    Well written.

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