Well written.

Hmm this poem is difficult to understand. I'm not sure if i got it or not but i will try. You feel as if you a drifting someone away? It's a great though. 4/5
-vino

Really good poem, i really did like it and thanks for the info ill use it when im writing keep it up to =p

I actually understood it, I I can relate to it. Well written. 5/5
Keep writing!

Very nice poem..grt work keep it up??
-mohd-