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by Teria Jun 2, 2007 category : Love, romance / rekindled love
If life were a dream, I'd reach for the sky bring down the furthest star, and put it in your eye. Replacing those tears that you still cry. If life were a dream, I'd run through a rainbow pick out each color, just so you'd know.. my love for you will always glow. The brightest colors, the beauty of hearts could not replace what tore us apart. The cancer itself was only the start. And, if life were a dream.. Baby, you'd know this as a lie. Because if life were a dream... time would never pass us by.
by Mel
Very sad. good flow...i loved the last stanza. :o)
by Kurt
I think this was beautiful. The sound and flow were perfect and everything fit in so well. I also loved how the poem ended. 5/5 easy.