Very nice, whos the special girl.
i likes it a lot my doo

This has to be my favorite, and you do a very good job with this non rhyming poem. it paints a vivid picture and full of emotion. i could defiantly see a poem like this published somewhere.

You definantly caught my attention with your choice of words (echo, melt, etc.). i also like the "harp of heart strings" concept. overall, great job!

Very beautiful poem...well penned...it's so sweet..filled with love...the choice of words was superb and the whole poem was filled with love and care for whoever the girl was...
Great job!
5/5
xxPoojaxx

This love poem delivers outstanding imagery with outstanding passionate flow. I love the metaphors, and the seemingly solid sentiment from the heart.

This poem is absolutely breath taking! One of the favorite poems I've read on this site. When I read it, I can picture every detail, I can see everything that's happening. The word choice is also incredible and it flows nicely

My favorite two lines were without a doubt:
"I brush the flawlessly pale complexion of your skin
The full outer expression of your innocence"

They were beautifully written and created a vivid picture. They actually reminded me of a book I've read =p not the point

Excellent poem, there is nothing you could've done to make it better 5/5

Beautiful...thats the only word I have for it...

Aw wow. amazing write.
:)

thanks for the comment.
i reallylove this poem there is so much emotion and i can really relate to it.
keep up the AMAZING work!

PS: change shined to shone in the 3rd to last paragraph.