by reJoyce Jun 2, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
You're lying on your bed |
The screams in your face |
by TracyM
Oh my god, I LOVE this poem, its perfect, and it flows so beautifully, I aboslutely love it. |
by NearlyCrazy6
Wow |
by Chris
I like the moral lesson behind it. i think a lot of people can relate to the first couple of stanzas... the losing friends part of it. i also noticed how you managed to make pleasing and reason rhyme so you get extra points for that. |
by STEVE
I love your poem very neaningful 5/5 |