by Kalgalath Jun 2, 2007
category :
Internet slang /
love, romance
Here we are, |
by Gizmo
I'd almost call it a fling, |
by ctmskm
Not bad with the transition of the two poems I enjoyed the amiable version somewhat more, mainly to the fact that the use of the F bomb in this poem seems to be used to often. You must know the key to a hostel environment is not the way you use profanity but the way you manipulate and distort your words into a form of antagonism. |
by Marie
Pretty good.. anger and hurt fill it but work on the rhythm in the second to last stanza |