by reJoyce Jun 2, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
As I look into your face |
This one is really beautiful..The choice of words was excellently |
by Melpomene
This poem I truely enjoyed reading, the imagery was quite vivid. The description was portrayed quite beautifully. Definitly a facinating read. |
by Just me
I love this one. it shows the respect you have for women and it is really well written and quite sweet. |
by Debbie
I, too, enjoyed reading your poem with its vivid descriptions and splendid imagery. I always admire love poems which depict of a subject talking about a goddess-like maiden in such a fine overstatement. And this piece is no exception to the rule. |
by reborn
Enjoyed ur poem a lot. especially liked the fact that this girl has totally breached u as u said and the feelings that come from that you barely are able to control.... haha that was cool when u said: |