by reJoyce Jun 2, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
My heart goes out |
Wow, started off a lil confusing abit un organised but picked up and finished off so well!! |
by Chris
I like the emotion behind the poem. i like the third stanza the best. it starts out really good, but it starts to lose flow when you start altering the length of the stanzas. it kind of bounces back and forth. overall though, great job! |
by Just me
Wow, is this is the poem u read on retreat right? i love it. it flows really nicely and has a great message i think everyone can relate to in some way or another. keep writing, these are amazing! |