Really sad poem with unfortunately the things that happen in some peoples life its out in the open but it doesnt heal the scars your friend Steve 5/5

Another great write! your messages are very powerful! keep up the good work!
god bless
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Tracy
What a heart wrenching piece you have written. It is hard to figure why life is so hard on some and not on others. You have chose to share and help others with your writing.

Keep asking this question
deep inside my head
why I got no supper
you sent me on to bed.

Learned a lot from this
how to handle myself
know how it's done
leave liquor on the shelf.

This is very sad to read.
Take Care Cindy

This is such a sad write, extremely painful. You can get a sense of the terror, desperation and complete and total misery. Really is such a heartbreaking piece

"Keep asking this question
deep inside my head
why I got no supper
you sent me on to bed"

This part got to me. Highlights the fact that kids are so innocent. Always wondering what they did to deserve to be treated like this and the fact is they did nothing - no one deserves that. Just so much pain in that poem, but makes it and excellent piece. Take care.

Kelly
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