Comments : MiNd brOkEn--?

  • 17 years ago

    by geeeeee

    "Love can only be true when you follow your h.e.a.r.t.
    if you only let your mind convince you of your love, it would be fake."

    Your spot on. In some ways I think we need to learn how to balance listening to our hearts and minds when it comes to love. For a 7th grader your poetry is amazing!

    Take Care :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Joshua Grider

    I really love this piece..
    it truely was written beautifully :)
    voted and gave you a 5/5 of course
    please return the favor