by dejanae Jun 2, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
I treat you like my family and this is how you repay me, you was wrong if you thought you could play me. I thought we was real I thought we was down and just because of you I wont be around.....Hope your happy hope you feel better, but it dosent matter cause you will never read this letter...Maybe one day we can laugh about this maybe not ..but 4 now thats all i got |
by Fsams
There are repeated mistakes dear. U should not use 'you was' and 'we was'. Correct them by using 'were'. Overall its good 4/5. |