Well written deep poem. Although the words are simple thy are effective. I found some of the rhymes to be a little forced, and that in turn made the flow a little rocky in somplaces but on=ver all the emtion was strong, and the message was clear, so a 5/5 it is

Beautiful poem...it's very well penned and the choice of words was beautiful and the message was really clear and stood out through the poem and the last stanza summedup the whole idea..All over
Great work!
5/5
xxPoojaxx

Honestly?
It either just didn't make sense
Was really forced
Or was just... well, random.

Sometimes you weren't even clear.
I'll give some examples of all.

I am broke
Do you mean you have no money?

wild and calm
or freakish and plain
[[lite]] the match
and strike your flame

1) You spelled lite wrong.
It's light
2) Your third and fourth stanza was just completely random

It was as though..
You just wanted it to rhyme.
I have to admit, it's pretty catchy
But it's just... forced.