You Changed Me

by Josh   Jun 2, 2007


I had closed the door that led into my heart and would not let anyone in,
I built up love and trust only for it to be broken but that was never to happen again.
I had locked that door and threw the key as hard and as far as I could,
love was not to enter again, my heart was sealed for good.
Then you came into my life and made me change my mind,
You proved me wrong just when I thought the tiny key was something I was not to find.
That's when you held out your soft delicate hand and proved me to be wrong,
inside your palm was the key I had tossed, you caught it.
Its been there all along.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ivy Stockill

    I loved this. It is just so cute! and so true!

  • 17 years ago

    by TyrantxTia

    Awe! ur poem is so sweet. i know this feeling. You mind if i use ur idea to make up my poem with this kind of thing? but its a 5/5 its actualy wow

  • 17 years ago

    by reborn

    Cool story n i liked that metaphore!! 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by geeeeee

    "Thats when you held out your soft delicate hand and proved me to be wrong,
    inside your palm was the key i had tossed, you caught it.
    Its been there all along."

    This was a great poem because I was captivated from the beginning to the end. How you ended it was really engaging, it was really sweet. Great write.

    Take Care.