Per chance a happened meeting on that night
As darkness overtook the streets, lone candles burning bright
A dusty fate upon a shivered heart
Two single dots where blood was stole, the only scars.
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Jeannie dang this stanza gave me goose
bumps ...
I love the title ... it definitely had my attention.

I like the rhyme pattern, very unique!
Flows wonderfully!

Wow Auntie your pen is flowing wonderfully tonight. Poetic excellence ......

Jeannie
Excellent piece. One I also learned from. I really love this. The love story with vampires. Wow. Your talent is beyond anything I could ever percieve.
Love Cindy