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Wow this is actualy realy good. i mean as i read it i felt you were saying it to me. i can feel the love you must have for this girl.. she's realy lucky

Shit sorry bro. i gave u a quick 4/5. but just read it again n if i could take it back i would give u a 5/5... i didn't see the rimes cuz of the way it's layed out... i'd advise u to seperate them this way:
"As I gaze into your eyes
i watch these days go by.
As I sit here holding you
im glad it's only us, only two.
As I think of all our past
we've had no reason not to last.
As I lay down by your side
feelings of love I can not hide.
As I rememeber the day we met
i wouldn't take back anything i have no regret.
As I write this poem for you I can not get you off my mind,
our love is strong it's so divine."

nice rimes! nice thoughts. really liked i feel bad i underated u. hope this comment makes it up! check out my poems i think we have a similar style of writting. i'll return the favor