I really enjoyed reading this poem :)
i can see many improvements with your writing :) and dont worry its hard sometimes to figure it out, many people have a problem with being alone humans arent built for that, but the key is simple, no matter what happends you have to do two things, smile! even if its at nothing just smile and seccond its NOT a big deal ;) just remember those two things and you'll be ok :D
5/5