A really unique poem. I love poems that are short, yet say a lot. This is one of them. Well done.

Tammie

Although this poem was really short I enjoyed all 8 words lol Excellent job 5/5

For a short poem, it said everything to me...
the imagery of it was great, it really got me...
it remembered me of today, actually, this dark morning...
(i also could learn what a cinquain is...=D)
5/5
*isabel*

Excellent poem...different...short..yet perfect!.....and held a lot of depth..
=)
5/5
Good job!
xxPoojaxx

Wow im really jealous that you can write so many different types of poems because i have a hard time doing different types so mine are pretty much all the same. you are a great writer..never stop writing!

Awhh, Taleee are you okayy? I lovee youu and I loved this poem. It was so simple yet contained so much meaning. I think you used the style really well and i jsut loved it. Nicely donee. 5/5