by Darien Jun 2, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Roses are Dead [Collab] |
<Everything seems to be fading like the writings in the sand> I love that line! :) |
by Twobit
This is beautiful, bro! 5/5 |
by Gasttlee
Excellent poem, bro! 5/5 |
by Just Lucy
Wow, so true, Its a great poem!! states reality in the cold hard facts! nice work both of you! but its not fair that I comment yours and not Nats lol, so I will comment hers now. |
by Jessica
As I toldd Taleee, this was AMAZING. I really loved it. The metaphors were unique and held so much meaning. The flow was good except for the last line was off a little bit. The emotion was very strong and I loved how you could not tell it was written by two different people. It seemed to just merge into one great writer. 5/5 |