by Miu Jun 2, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
Waiting for the train. |
by ali
Simple and honest stuff, i really liked this one!!! |
by UnToLd TrUtH
I loved this poem! Every simple wich i liked. 5/5 |
by Fluffy
Good piece on the whole again, but some minor adjustments would help improve this a little: |
by The DaveJon
Very down to earth and solid. The scheme did have a hiccup in the middle, and I had to reread that section, but an overall good poem. |