Thankyou for the Comment Love =]

its been a while since I've really had time to read anyones work but this is wonderful as I have come to expect from you.

"this isn't my loyalty, it's a fetish for disaster,"

Lovvvvve that line. Seriously, Hope you are well missy.

xx

I loved it! You had nice flow wanting me read more of it even though it had ended! lol

5/5

<UnToLd TrUtH>

I agree with the above comment, i didnt want this poem to ever end, i could have read it forever! i just admire so much, the way you can express yourself and the imagery you use. this poem was particularly effective.
excellent. FULL STOP

I don't lack the conscience but i do lack control,

I can actually relate to that one. Lol.

Honestly?
This doesn't even seem like a poem.
It seems better than a poem.
I could tell all this came straight from the heart.
It was quite... riveting and emotional.
Your word choice was perfect.

At first, it was kind of blah to me.
I don't like reading the format that you used.
It was pretty slow in the beginning.
But when I read my favorite line.
I was... hooked.
I just had to keep on reading.
This was emotion you could see, feel, hear, taste, smell.
Loved it.
5/5?

Wow

It was such mind boggling when I looked at it first time.But it was amazing..You get out your feelings so well and your description were so powerful..and just a thought that It would be perfect if you get that in stanzas..just to make it easy to read
Other than that
It was amazing
Keep it up,
From another Laura :)