Sorry coz i let u go

by ECILA ice   Jun 2, 2007


I always convince myself
That I could get over this
I always tell myself
Sooner I can live on my own again
But I was such a fool to believe
That I could wake up one morning
Accepting everything as it is
As if you've never been a part of me

I thought I just need time and space;
I thought it would be okay
Simply if I just run away
Yeah I thought it would be so easy
But I was a fool
Thinking that I can walk on the same street
That we used to be together
Alone, as if I never knew this place

But no matter how hard I tried
I just can't deny how my heart hurts
I was really a fool
To let go of one great guy
And now I'm missing you so much

*yeah i was sorry for myself and i don't know if i can find someone like u...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    I can see alot of grammar errors, and I'm expecting you to fix it. Nonetheless, I thought it was great and a written piece.

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Well it was a good poem.. I have some suggestions though..

    First. Try to eliminate some of the I's.. Coz using many I's messes up the flow =)

    Second. canâ?? < just edit this..

    Third. Capitalize the I in the title =)

    Nonetheless a good read =)

  • 17 years ago

    by lexi

    Great poem!!!! i love it 5\5

  • 17 years ago

    by Dian PH

    VERY NICE KEEP IT UP!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Dian PH

    EXSALENTE!!!