Abused

by kimara4955   Jun 2, 2007


I've been abused so many times,
Yet i let them get away with their crimes.
Nobody understands me,
I just want to be free.

I want to cry,
Yet the tears won't fall from my eyes.
I cut myself to stop the pain,
Sometimes i think I'm insane.
As nobody Care's,
you all just sit their and stare.

it's uncompleted and needs alto of work done to it, but let me now what you think so far, i would really appreciate it, and will return the favor

xx take care xx

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  • 17 years ago

    by Estefania

    Its good! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I think its good, you have me hooked on your writing now, as you ended it no one cares and they just stare maybe try writing what they are seeing compared to what you are feeling on the inside? just an idea, however its actually very good whether you add to it or not xxxx