by Tricky Daze Jun 2, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Everything starts like a fairy tale; |
by cory
Another perfect poem doll i think i shed a tear.5/5 write on!! |
Wow another wonderful sad poem and i liked how you used nothing but a child. My ex always called me a child. |
by LovelyDivine
This is great. keep up the great work. 5/5 |
by SeGrAdA
Such a sad poem but i can feel hw true u were while writing it |
Very sad poem. I loved the repeition of "Nothing but a child". That was very effective and it kept me drawn into the poem. As for the topic, I think it's great that you dedicated this to mothers who lost their husbands. 5/5 |