Run With It All

by 19Rusty   Jun 2, 2007


Life after love, after time, has expired and there
is nothing but the light, that goes to the shadows,
that breathes out our foes, all of our woes,
and our savior will be so bright, at the right, will
be the devil as he screams, anything that you can
hold become bold, showing your colors, keep her close
tonight, be that other man, who would die, at
first the rush, the crush, of who you love, and die,
do what possible to keep them forever, night
after night go on and fold, the worries you hold, in
the palm of your mind, take the short thoughts you
see in life, doubts and harm, run away with them,
die in the name of her name, after that, watch all the
warmth you have burned, days have been cold,
because of this a blanket of sensuality, confusion in
the air, but hearts will turn, leave the life you planned,
what you can't see will be so perfect and wrong, let
me hold you hand, lets continue to drift away, in others
faces, the hate, my heart rate will be so high, but I
can't break these laws, nothing of what us, will
become, days of solitude, the times at places we hate,
having to wait on, lets go with what we will never know.

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  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Exvellent freeverse...beautiful write...i think a proper structure was lacking though but give you an easy 5/5 for the depth and power portrayed in this write!

    Great job!
    =)

    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    This was a lovely freestyle poem
    I think it should have a tad bit more structure though
    this piece was beautiful
    I loved it
    you did an amazing job
    5/5 love always kaila

  • 17 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a beautifu freestyle love poen on a heavenly scale

  • 17 years ago

    by This Starlight

    This poem is very very good.
    It's not like the other love poems, where people just talk about who they love,but yours was way deeper than that..great job.