by KeyxMashingxParody Jun 2, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Stuck in another lifeless vibe, |
Wow!!...great write...the words were very well chosen and suited the poem really well..and you've penned ity carefully too..though the flow was a tad off..it was a good write! |
by Brittany C
Very good. The flow was ok for the most part. I gave it a 5/5. |