Wow. I love this poem. I can totally relate to what your feeling.
A few thousand hidden smiles
Have withered into frowns
After floating up to cloud nine
I'm finally falling down.
That stanza really caught my attention and made me want to read more.
Great Job
5/5
-amber-

Yeah he might but sometimes its hard to let go :) its a beautifull poem as always it gets a 5/5 :)

I love it.. did you win the contest.. because i dont think poems get any better than this.. 5/5 absolutely awesome

Wow that was a good piece of poetry, and I enjoyed spending my time reading it :) The flow was magic and the words were so descriptive I felt I was feeling your pain.
5/5 always

Quillx

Awehh ! I love this. I got the feeling that you were trying to impress like a friend that you liked ut he was oblivious and once you lost feelings for him he finally figured it out. Dunno if that`s what you were going for with this one or not, but I still love that ! Your imagery is amazing in this piece, really stood out on the screen. Great job.

"Secrets that I used to keep
Don't mean anything at all.
Pictures I worked hard to get
Seem so petty and small."

^^ LOVE those lines, so relateable for me.

5,5
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This is a truly remarkable poem, i love every second of it. Flows very nicely and keep you enticed the whole way through.

Hours I spent wondering
What that look had meant,
Are thought of as wasted time
That could be better spent.

Wow i think just about everyone who ever lived can relate to that.

Wonderful piece.

5/5