You have a very powerful voice. i think you could go somewhere with you're poetry.
wow, amazing.

and youre a guy...

damnit how come there aren't guys like you in my school??

OMG this is wonderful OMG your an awesome writer cant wait to hear more of your poems!!! i think if you really tired you could go far with your poems anways good job 5/5

This is a really great poem! you are an awesome writer...dont let anyone ever try to tell you different! i will give you a 5/5 on this one