by Becca Jun 2, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Have you ever taken a walk |
by Chris
I love the overall concept of it. the ending was remarkable and i like that you actually stuck with the shadow idea throughout the entire poem. some people start a concept and don't complete it. good job! but, i think those 2 lines that are extremely long throw off the flow since all the others are a lot shorter. but it's no big. overall, great job! |
by Refinnej Sin
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