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..honestly......and simply.....wow
i love this with the burning passion of a thousand suns! i mean wow! i'm going to tell my friends! like.....wow lol

I love the overall concept of it. the ending was remarkable and i like that you actually stuck with the shadow idea throughout the entire poem. some people start a concept and don't complete it. good job! but, i think those 2 lines that are extremely long throw off the flow since all the others are a lot shorter. but it's no big. overall, great job!