This is very creative...I love it..You are a magnificent writer...
5/5
love Brit

Loved it. :]
I bet that's how he really feels, eh. I love reading Trijan Refrain's, but I can't write them too well. I love how they're put together and such. Especially how you did it. :]

Keep it up.

WHY WAS THIS A 4.5!?

Man, didn't understand that before I read it; definately don't understand it after reading it. This poem is amazing, it holds so much in it. I want to try writing one of these. :[ Lol. Good job, Darling.

5.5
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<3

I think that you did a beautiful job with this one because when you wrote I really got the impression that the devil missed the place but at the same time he didn't regret anything that he did. And its very hard to combine those two different thoughts into one peice of writing. Nice job. The only that that I can critique on is take another look at the syliable count you are a little off in some places. But other than that nice job.

What I really like about reading each one of your poems is how unique the topics seem to be. I would never have come up with an idea to write about something like the devil missing heaven it's just so different but in a really amazing way. I really liked this poetry form i've seen it many times before although I don't think any have compared to this piece. You write into such a great depth and explore different areas which is highly noticed throughout each poem of yours. Well done, Sheena. ~Mel