Long Gone

by Becca   Jun 2, 2007


It's like a car crash
In slow motion
A slip
On an icy road
Skidding, spinning
Out of control
You watch your world
Slip from under you
Smash into a tree
The last straw
And all fades
Far, far away

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  • 17 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    This was good, I liked it. I think you could've made it more metaphorical and it would've sounded better. 4/5

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