This is very vivid and well written...I think is wonderful
5/5

Wow.. this is wondeful! amzingly written.
you have a true talent!
loved it!
5/5

'One day you might be okay . . . who are we kidding? you're too far gone to save. '
^ Amazing line. :]

I really liked this poem. I had to read it twice, the words were kinda jumbled together, eh. But, after I read it the second time I realized it's a great poemm. Extremely emotional, and great descriptive words. Along with the meaning.

Keep it up.

Great poem. I liked the flow though I thought that it was a little off in some places but it didn't really hurt the poem any. I really liked the word choice. I gave it a 5/5.

Wow this is a very dark poem. very different then what i'm use to reading, so i have to give you props for that. it was kind of... weird tho and strange, which is good i guess cause it's something you dont see a lot. so keep on writing like this 5/5

~Krisitna

This is an amazing poem - dark, but so enchanting! it sounded a bit like prose it parts, but it was almost too intense to be, plus the flow was so perfect. the repetition of some words and phrases really added to the effect, but sometimes I wasn't exactly sure I knew what you meant - like, how can you press a scissors into your kidney? wouldn't you die? I wouldn't actually know, thats just what I think. Regardless of any critique, this was an absolutely amazing poem!

First off, I loved the story line behind your words...it was very creative and something you don't see a lot of readers explore into these days, lol. The imagery was good and so was the flow, all in all this was a really good poem; not that I should expect any different from you.

5.5
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<3

Ehh sorry i can not say this is one of your best poems... well in my opinion at least other people probably enjoy it more then me.. but i still enjoyed it non the less so i give it a 4/5

Not your best. I liked the idea behind it but I thought the flow was kind of off and it didn't seem to have as much heart and soul in it as your other poems do.

I don't really see why you titled it 'The Autopsy'. The only other organ you used besides the skin was a kidney.

Like I said before, the flow was off. It seemed more like you wanted to get something out of your system so bad that you forgot to put your essence into it.

Not your best but it wasn't terrible either. 4/5