Hey,
Well i liked this read. the first stanza made me intrested in what the poem was about. A humble man? I felt like you wnated to walk through life with osmeone really caring and wise. It made me wonder what you meant by saying this. Then you talk about the man and how you seem... so helpless. Hmm... could you be talking about the angle of death hear? Anyways the flow of the poem was ok but a littlle sketchy towards the end. I felt you could of used a mroe varied punctuation. I like the entire idea youve got going on for this poem. Its an enjoyable read. Keep writing! xx