by cindy miranda Jun 3, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I THANK G0D 4 GIVING ME A HEART.I THANK G0D 4 TEACHING ME 2 LOVE.I THANK G0D 4 THAT LOVELY NITE.I THANK G0D 4 PUTTING U I SIGHT.I THANK G0D 4 BRINGING ME 2 U. I THANK G0D 4 MAKING U MINE.I THANK G0D 4 MAKING MY LIFE BRITE. I THANK G0D 4 MAKING IT RIGHT.I THANK G0D WITH 0UT A FIGHT THAT HE CREATED U 4 ME 2 LOVE |
by Debbie
If I may suggest, perhaps changing the words in a sentence case or lowercases will not scare the readers of your poem. (^^,) I find its substance rather delightful to read. Take care now. |