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by Flame Jun 3, 2007 category : Sadness, depression / other
Staring at a castle Looking all alone Pulling on my tassle What more is to come? Rolling down a hill Shining like a star I start to feel a chill Where do I belong? Suddenly I hear footsteps Walking towards my way Is the the end... Someone crept my way?
by claire
This was an amazing poem - but the last line could've been stronger. it doesn't have to rhyme - just fit a little better, maybe.
by Raven
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
