Final Fantasy

by Romancing the Darker Side   Jun 3, 2007


Taken back by the life
He's lived on the street
Dreams of being a pirate
So strangers he may greet

His brother's life taken
By one his friends call an ally
The only one whom he could trust
Never got a proper good-bye

Meeting up to discover
Wonders in his land
Traveling through swamplands
And deserts filled with sand

His best friend captured
Was thankfully rescued again
His dreams of something more
Never can begin

Politics have driven him
However cliche and classy
Becoming a sky pirate
Is his final fantasy

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This poem is about Final Fantasy XII, where Vaan loses his brother to Basch and dreams of becoming a sky pirate.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Startle Me

    First off..
    I loved that game.
    I'm kind of amazed that you could do a poem about it.
    But then, I don't know...
    It's just hard for me to think this as a poem.
    It's more like a summary in my eyes.

    So strangers he may greet
    A bit forced.

    Yeah, your ending was a bit cliched.
    I never finished the game.
    How did it end?

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Ive never seen the final fantasy series or so on but this seemed interesting and really made me want to watch it. It was penned nicely with good flow nice choice or words and kept me hooked from first stanza onwards. Nice work with this. Good effort~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    I don't know about this final fantasy...mean never seen it...But the poem is interesting...It flowed well and the choice of words was great and the whole poem was different and ended well ...Liked it!
    5/5

    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I never seen the final fantasies but the poem itself is great. I has a good flow and the words were chosen nicely. I especially liked the last stanza, it was a great ending. nicely done 5/5

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