I've been toying with the notion of writing a play with a love scene (notice the play on words?) similar to this one in it. Or possibly a novel. I dunno. It would be a while either way. So many exams...

This was intentionally going to be an "erotic" poem, re a dsicussion forum by Bob Shank. It kinda changed since then. Oh well.

Comments greatly appreciated!
HxR

I don't know how I should come about praising you again. Your words are deep and they all make the hair on my arms stand up. For every sticky situation I am in, I remember one of your poems and I calm down and begin to think clearly. WOW 5/5

Oh wow I re-read this again and I love it. Still. man dude dont stop writing ever!