Chels,

Beautifully written poem about trust, the flow was smooth from begining to end. Nice message also.

Warmest regards,

Steve

Chels even though I am only your cyber Mom this brought tears to my eyes ... You are growing up sweet pea. It seems like only yesterday we met and now you have a boyfriend and learning to drive and all .....
Chels your Mom must be so proud of you. I know I am. It's hard for Mom's to let go of their children. It has become a scary world but it is people like you Chels who make a difference .... who make people see that there are still some kind and caring people left in this world.

Chels you are an inspiration to many ... keep being exactly who you are.

Luv ya sweet pea
Muah !
Momma

This is such a great poem, and I love how strong your faith and resolve are. I wish I had that strength. I can totally relate about getting your parents to trust you, even when they have no reason not to. great writing!

Chelsey
What a wonderful piece. It takes moms along time to let go of their daughters. You are a very special young lady. I know your mom knows this. Great poem.
Take Care Cindy

Awesum poem keep up the good work

Watching your children grow is one of the most amazing and scary experiences one can endure...But Chelsey your an amazing young woman you really are your parents should be so proud of the fantastic young woman they have raised. My your poetry certainly has developed as well! This poem is very well depicted a great show of emotions, you really draw the reader in with your words and captivate them in the story you have painted so well - another masterpiece sis!

Ahh all parents are the same aren't they? This poems touching, Really great job. Loved the flow throughout.
It has a really nice message to it.
Well done