Omg, this poem made of cry for is it possible that some character exist in this world?
so sad. so emotional.
a very greatly written piece.

Oh gee, i wish this didn't have to happen to anyone. it hurts to know that ppl can even think this stuff up. some ppl in the world i know are cruel and decietful. dam them.

5/5 tho. well done, David

This is by far the best of yours I have read. Really made my day reading this. Such strong emotion portrayed. The imagery was vivid and fantastic. Well done with this a good explict poem~mel

That is very very sad!! and very disturbing.
its horriable that things like this actully happen to children...

This was a heartrending poem.
Nice work, nonetheless.

Oh god what an aweful way to live. Such a sad poem, but very well written... Kindergarden and she's going through something like that.. very strong.
I hope this isn't based off a true story, or worse some kind of personal experience.
5/5 for sure.

The imaging is clearly written and you want for the girl to have a new beginning, and also of what would happen later in time. It is a good one.

It was sad but really good

This is a good poem t very sad, i love it u r a gr8 writer.

Omg it is so sad. it was such a great poem. i loved it. i added you to my fave's hope thats ok, and maybe if you have time you could look at some of my poems. well i loved it 5/5 from me

This poem was 1 of the best poems that I have ever read. this deserves a 5/5!!!!!! I LUVD THIS!!!!!

You are very talented, it puts me to shaow. You write with a raw passion, you can really feel it. Well done cutey

Oh wow, this was so sad, you told the story of this little girl perfectly, for you it seemed to be easy, the flow was so smooth and the sadness and emotion were so powerful...
5/5
gabriella

All i can say is wow. i am speachless this poem is sooooooooooo great. good job 10/10

Oh my god, that was horrible, not the poem, no, the content, what happened to that little girl. The poemitself was awesome, so raw, the emotion was overpowering, and the imagery was wow.
You are so talented!

This seriously made me sick to my stomach. You did a VERY good job on this. 5/5 completely.

she sobs and cries and bags, but it does no good.

did you mean "begs".

Good job hun.

Wow, this poem is so sad and strong. i really liked it. i found only one error while reading this.

little girls --girl's

5/5.

Omg this almost made me cry... it is so touching... i cant even begin to understand people that could bare to do that to their own children... you did an awesome job at describing it... <3

Wow... =|
I'm really speechless! Really powerfull.
This is really worth a 5/5!
xxx

That was very deep...I liked it...The flow was again really good...The ending was strong...It was an enjoyable read....

5/5..... =]