This poem is just truely amazing and shows how much of a gifted writer you are!.. and only 14 and wow your gonna be so awesome when you get older! im speechless! 10/10

WOW!!!! that is scary t says a lot about raping. it is so sad put together very well its like your pouring out the emotions from your heart, it shows so much passion!

A poem about harsh reality...stunningly written

WOW! what a great write.
well you already know i feel strongly about this topic..it disgusts me.
the poem was very well done.
so powerful. the emotions running through it were deep and filled with pain.
the ending especially took my breath away.
this poem is truly brilliant and moving!
keep it up =]
--Viola

That was absolutely dreaful, the story of course, the poem was beautifully written and you give amazing desciptions and provide a very strong image. Great rhymes too, even though in a few places the flow was a little off. No big deal though. Despite the fact it's content makes me sick to my stomach, it was a wonderful write. 5/5

marcella

I can't believe a father could do that and you described it so well, i feel really sorry for a little girl who was the victem even if it wasn't true, great job

WOW!!! this was awesome! one of the best i have ever read! deff. 5/5

A very deep and dark poem, and so sad. You can feel yourself there as you read it. Your writing style is fantastic, I'll definitely be reading more.

((hugs))
~Tara

So painfully sad, and so sicking that someone could do this to another human being a child. It angers me. the word choice was perfect, the flow was right on, the emotion was devestating, and the power was deep. you did an amazing job on this one, no room for improvent 5/5 although you deserve more.

Sad. I'm sorry if that's something you went through. Great poem, lots of emotion put into this. 5/5

Wow, I love this poem. It's so beautiful. You expressed it very well and I felt very sad. The flow was as good as the poem. Great job. 5/5

And yet another breath taking poem. I like the way you write your poems. They're full of emotion. You've got great talent. 5/5

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Omg what a sad poem....it made me cry because i know how much of this goes on in the world!!....and my best friend was rapped in 5th grade and omg this poem brought back so many memories!!! :'-(.....but very well written obviously i could feel the emotion in the poem

<3 i love you silly

Really sad piece to read, though well written, the emotion is strong in the one. keep writing

Wow......ur peom is so sad .....i got a question though what made u write this? did u see it in a movie or sumthin? did it happen to anyone u know or sumthin?...well i dont wanna be nosey dont tell me if u dont wan though.i think this is really good check mine if u ever have the chance

Amazing poem, it shows so much emotion and it hurts so much to know this happens to people. But again great poem.

Omg great poem did this really happen to you or what?

because i know it does and that is what pisses me off i mean seriously big d1ck small v@g1n@. wow give it to ur wife d0uch3 bag! uggg those people make me sick and if this did happen to you im very sorry.

5/5

Omg that was so sad. I'm writing a poem sorta like this. Well just like this but I'm putting it in 2 parts. But this is so good. And so sad. I just touched my heart. I hope that this didn't happen 2 u. If it did than if u ever want 2 talk than I'm here ok. Sometimes it's just easier 2 talk 2 ppl that don't really know u cuz they can't judge u.

-->Rach<--