by missy Jun 3, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I walk down this road |
by Fan Angeleo
Good, Excellent and very fine talent. |
by glenn
Great poem 5/5 but if i may to make it better try changing the last line "since you said goodbye" to "since you said your goodbyes" it sounds better with the line "a thousands knives" because of the S on it... change it or keep it either way its a great poem and 5/5 |