I like ur style! the way u write and the particular moments that u describe which are so true n i can relate to:
"The days are passing slowly, my bed feels so cold
There's nothing to look forward to, no one there to hold
The silence speaks much louder, or so I have learned
Of all the words you threw me, not one word was heard
I cannnot stop this heartbreak, things can't be the same
If we can never heal, it's me that you can blame
I'm sorry for your tears, for everytime I lied
I promised I would change, but hope was dead inside"
not sure what happened there, it's like u purposely killed that relationship? 5/5