Great poem. Sometimes pain is the only way of knowing you are still alive. But this I can see is different. I love the flow and wonderful word choice. 5/5

I tought this was good. I like this type of poems but i have never tried it. I think you had great flow and the word choice was really good. i dont really see anything wrong with this.

I found this poem to also be cliche. I liked it for a mintute poem though the flow seemed great and smooth didnt rock once at all. This was a good poem for a cliche topic so well done on creating something of your own. ~mel

I felt you chose strong vocabulary and had a nice story-like scene going on, although I wish you would have gotten more into the emotion of the girl instead of just the actual event. I wanted to see emotion from this poem, but didn't get it... still, a nice poem.

You like minute poetry dont you? This line; "She's crying, crying, but she can't stop" is meant to have 8 sylables and you used 9. So edit that bit? Now i think this poem has more emotion then the previous one i read. I liked how you described the blade as a "saviour" and your poem creates this imagery that really shows what she has done and you can imagine the blood shooting out. This line; "Her dead skin rots" was acctually kindof intresting. The poem is about suicide and your tallking about what she has done and so. So how can dead skin rot? I mean it can but she isnt dead yet. So its intresting. Maybe metaphorically your sayiong that she feels dead or something? An intresting read. to improve iuse a more varied punctuation. But a good read. Keep writing! xx

I've actually never seen this type of poem before. It's very different, but I really like it.

You have one typo:: "releif" should be "relief". Other than that, this poem is great. You definitely got your point across.

Wow. the intensity of them poem. you describe every single feeling, emotion that a cutter feels, it was amazing. it was well done, you had me from the start to the end. 5/5

I loved the imagery. It felt as if It was I who was experiencing the pain. The vocabulary was strong, the emotions heart renching.
It flowed beautifully, making for an excellent read.
Very much enjoyable,
Elaine.

Almost a perfect minute poem. there was one typo, rel[ei]f, and the last two lines don't rhyme. You could prove me wrong on that though.

Very powerful. You did great job with the form, it is interesting. Whole poem is greatly written, very effective from the beginning to the end. You created very intense and vivid imagery along with flawless flow in each stanza. I like your choice of words and the whole haunting atmosphere of this piece.
Greatly done!
5/5 from me

So true for many people, my fav. line is:Her blade savior
The hurt is right
-good descriptions

Blades are my best friends.
They are always there whenever I need them.

Nicely written.
I can feel you.

xxx.

Great poem! your dark works reflect a lot of pain gathered in a joyful talent. i really like the rhyming pattern as well because it isn't seen that often any more. 5/5 congratulations.